I liked the introduction as it is pretty informative as well as pretty clear. I feel that you could have tried to be more resonant in terms of the volume at which you speak. Also, I feel that you could have went over your script a little more before you started recording as there was a few pauses of "umm...". I think that in your video you might have some nervous energy, as your hands are always moving and shifting.
I liked the introduction as it is pretty informative as well as pretty clear. I feel that you could have tried to be more resonant in terms of the volume at which you speak. Also, I feel that you could have went over your script a little more before you started recording as there was a few pauses of "umm...". I think that in your video you might have some nervous energy, as your hands are always moving and shifting.
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