Suggestion 1) You can use a script or something so that you can have a better flow and able to be less jerkySuggestion 2) Maybe you can improve on the handling of the video so that the video will not be so jerky.Shadow Gestures:- You will touch your face with your hands- When you are thinking, you will look up.(Raise your eyebrows)
HILARIOUS.Steps to be Shawn :1) Be awesome2) Stay awesome3) Be Shawn
Good Points:Good hand gestures.Maintain eye contact, most of the times.Bad Points:Video is jerky.Limited Vocabulary.Not as awesome.Not Fluent, keeps saying "erm."Often hesitate.