Grace, I like the content that you shared in the video as it ranged from different perspective of your life; let it be passion and so on. The first suggestion is to tight up your hair so that you will look smarter in the video and the second suggestion is to summarise a little of your content so to make the content tighter. As you have mentioned in class, your shadow gesture was to pull your shirt. Take note of it and I like what you talked about in the video! :)
Grace, I like the content that you shared in the video as it ranged from different perspective of your life; let it be passion and so on. The first suggestion is to tight up your hair so that you will look smarter in the video and the second suggestion is to summarise a little of your content so to make the content tighter. As you have mentioned in class, your shadow gesture was to pull your shirt. Take note of it and I like what you talked about in the video! :)
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