Thursday, June 30, 2011

EL Oral Recording_14 - Joshua Ma

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1 comment:

  1. The context was organised and not just talking about things that are not related to each other.
    Suggestions:
    Maybe you can elaborate more on your hobbies.
    Cut down on the speech about how you dont like to work with slackers or something as many people will have simlar feelings.
    As for the "shadow gestures", there is not much of it, you are standing quite still.

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